Crops

First paragraph from Chapter 2 of upcoming novel: What They Did Instead

It was a slow-moving summer morning of no plans. Juliette, on the third of her twelve daily cups of black coffee, was carefully

slicing a bowl of slippery peaches. Picked from their acreage that morning, the fruit was juicy, the size of softballs,

and would spoil them for all other peaches the rest of their lives. When the phone rang, Hedy plucked a couple of slices from the

bowl, handed one to Bridget and slid the other in her mouth. Juliette rinsed her hands at the sink and by the fourth ring, grabbed

the receiver. It was her mother, Ruby, calling with a medical report she knew was coming.

5 thoughts on “Crops

  1. The mood is slow and easy and relaxed, good friends enjoying peace and nature and food together in a happy rhythm. The call from Ruby with a medical report darkens the scene with suspense – who is the subject of the report and what does it say. It feels ominous….the report will not be good, one fears.

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